This is my tenth essay. I think I should stop here because I have to let the teacher edit you guys’ essays. My job is finished. I am retiring now.
If I continued to write the teacher and you would grow tired of my essays. So, I had better stop here. My job now is to just enjoy reading you guys’ essays. If you wrote your essays as quickly as me, you would retire soon, also.
Friday, January 26, 2007
Cam's tenth essay
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I wouldn't retire until I had a new writing job
And you may not get it if you don't keep practicing.
Have you ever seen those cartoons where you are asked to find five errors in the picture?
Try and find as many grammar problems as you can in this short peice.
Keep writing. I love reading your stories.
Smiling with you,
Richard
Cam's tenth essay
This is my tenth essay. I think I should stop here because I have to let the teacher edits you guys’ essays. My job is finish. I am retire now.
If I continued to write the teacher and you will be tired of my essays. So, I had better stop here. My turn now just enjoy to read you guys’ essays. If you did it as quick as me, you’ll be retiring soon.
Read Cam Hong's recent essay, "Why I Like to Write", before you retire.
Hi, teacher,
I found five errors in my essay already.
Thank you for giving me a hint.
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